求一篇大学英语作文.2010年11月19日上午10点前有效,IN MY MIND.字数大概150.不需要高深词汇.简单易

Can we change our fate?
No one was born to an unchangeable life,our fate depends on our own efforts .
Just as countless famous and successful people in history suffered a lot,we ordinary people can also overcome obstacles to get what we pursue with our perseverance and determination.
First ,we must build up our own confidence and believe our friends'encourage,which is basic but indispensable to our success.Second,apart from the strong beliefs,what we need to equip ourselves and to carry out the plan is to not to give up easily.If we can insist on doing the right things step by step,someday we will achieve our dream.Third,keeping up with the time and always being optimistic and easygoing will also benifit us a lot.Last , we are supposed to keep in mind that god always do the diligent one a favor.(天道酬勤）
From above,personally,if we can keep fit both mentally and physically,it won't be much difficult and tough for us to change our fate.Now that a large number of people have demonstrated they have changed their fate successfully,why can't we?