我写啦一篇作文 大家15分给我打多少分吖

我写啦一篇作文 大家15分给我打多少分吖
There are a lot of ways to keep,for example.you eat a balancde diet ,you do sports everyday and so on .Now,it is important for us to eat a balanced diet,because a balanced diet can make us healthy.And if you have enough time to sleep is also important.According to doctor's advice,staying up late is bad for our health,especially teenagers So we must have enough time to sleep .Doing sports is becoming more and more important in our daily life.If we do sports everyday We wlll have a healthey body .And making ourselves feel happy is also needed And don't always feel nervous
清风冰雨 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

wolker 幼苗

共回答了23个问题采纳率:87% 举报

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1年前

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06王者 幼苗

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最好能分段写或者有一个小标题,这样会让人们看的很舒服 另外有一些语句不是很通顺 ,注意时态 我觉得13分吧

1年前

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人贱寡人收b 幼苗

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好多句开头没大写,不过还真的不不错,我采纳了。。。
顶啊。。
继续加油哦。。
给你14.9分,还有0.1分送我咯。。。

1年前

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澜龙 花朵

共回答了17个问题采纳率:88.2% 举报

14分。如果给你满分,你会骄傲,下次就写不好

1年前

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