这个句子怎么修改下 表达更清晰Convincing arguments can be made that control

这个句子怎么修改下 表达更清晰
Convincing arguments can be made that controlling the amount of violence in the media generates numerous benefits.
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Convincing arguments can be made on the numerous benefits of controlling the amount of violence in the media.
在最大程度保留原句的基础上调了下句序.如果想更简洁的话,删除on the numerous benefits of,换成for, argue for 支持某一方 can be made for media violence control.

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convincing arguments can be made to support that,numerous benefits can be generated from controlling the amount of violence in the media

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