哪里写的不好请多多指教2010年6月英语六级作文1,近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象2,出现这种现象的原因和后果3

哪里写的不好请多多指教
2010年6月英语六级作文
1,近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象
2,出现这种现象的原因和后果
3,为了改变这种状况,我认为...
Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese
Recently years,an increasingly members ofstudents fail to study of Chinese.This phenonenon,which fail to see,has popularitied among the university,and it is dramatic amazingly worst for Chinese language for learn.
Why does it happen?There involves in some reasons:First and foremost,a group of students believe that Chinese is our mother tongue,we are imperative to learn it.What's more,weshould learn more foreign language which can obtain more opportunities in hunting job.Last but not least,the Chinese,which is past time,eliminating in our life.Ignore the learning of Chinese,it can be result in the language forgotten,and it badly for the Chinese traditional culture.
For change this situation ,I believe that it is time to set up the curriculum in some university.In this curriculum,we can aquire more about Chinese language and Chinese culture,and we should develop some activities for announce the Chinese.It can spark us to learn Chinese.
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小小小玉米 幼苗

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1开头就出错,老师很残忍的……increasingly改成increasing
2study是及物动词,没有必要加of
3主被动形式搞混淆吗,which fail to see改为which has been failed to take into consideration
4 we are imperative to learn it.中式英语,看不懂,改为it is imperative for us all to learn it well
5主客体搞错,which can obtain more opportunities in hunting job.改为which can provide us with more opportunities in hunting job.
6 Last but not least,the Chinese,which is past time,eliminating in our life中句子成分残缺不全,为了使这个句子完整一点,which没有必要用,is 改为in eliminating 改为eliminates
7 Ignore the learning of Chinese,it can be result in the language forgotten,and it badly for the Chinese traditional culture.有四个错误:第一,这个句子出现了两个谓语形式,ignore和result,把ignore改为ignoring,第二出现了两个主语,把it 去掉,第三中式英语,前面既然用了ignore,后面又用forgotten,是重复啰嗦,而且forgotten用的不对(过去分词不能作为名词来用的),第四and后面的分句,缺少谓语,在badly之前加一个is,
8 For change this situation,照应了第一段首句出错的悲剧,change应该为changing
9高级表达法用错了,定语和名词单复数不匹配it is time to set up the curriculum in some university.改为it is time that we set up the curriculum in some university.,前面用了some,那么university要加s
10 for announce the Chinese中的announce改为announcing
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