小小小玉米
幼苗
共回答了22个问题采纳率:86.4% 举报
1开头就出错,老师很残忍的……increasingly改成increasing
2study是及物动词,没有必要加of
3主被动形式搞混淆吗,which fail to see改为which has been failed to take into consideration
4 we are imperative to learn it.中式英语,看不懂,改为it is imperative for us all to learn it well
5主客体搞错,which can obtain more opportunities in hunting job.改为which can provide us with more opportunities in hunting job.
6 Last but not least,the Chinese,which is past time,eliminating in our life中句子成分残缺不全,为了使这个句子完整一点,which没有必要用,is 改为in eliminating 改为eliminates
7 Ignore the learning of Chinese,it can be result in the language forgotten,and it badly for the Chinese traditional culture.有四个错误:第一,这个句子出现了两个谓语形式,ignore和result,把ignore改为ignoring,第二出现了两个主语,把it 去掉,第三中式英语,前面既然用了ignore,后面又用forgotten,是重复啰嗦,而且forgotten用的不对(过去分词不能作为名词来用的),第四and后面的分句,缺少谓语,在badly之前加一个is,
8 For change this situation,照应了第一段首句出错的悲剧,change应该为changing
9高级表达法用错了,定语和名词单复数不匹配it is time to set up the curriculum in some university.改为it is time that we set up the curriculum in some university.,前面用了some,那么university要加s
10 for announce the Chinese中的announce改为announcing
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