谁帮我用英语改一篇汉语作文?（是英语老师布置的）

hi everyone.my name is.i'm a single-16-boy.i'm happy that i can hav a reporte here .my study isn't so good and have a ordinary-looking but you still can have a look..then i'll tell you a story .ok . my report isover thanks
故事：in the middle school a boy get along well with a lovely girl(or boy ) and we soon fall in love. but on the class for individual study the girl spoke loudly and the boy who worked as the class monitor .he was so angry that he talked to her loudly and unfriendly . she was angry too.so that they friendship broke after that .and when they known how the low mark they got .they known what the imporent of study hard andconcertradion. And they all deciede to study hard
在中学,一个男孩和一个女孩相处的很好,很快他们交往了,但是在一节晚自习,这个女孩说话很大声,这个作为班长的男孩很生气,所以语气很重.女孩也生气了,他们因此而分了手.之后的一次考试及,但他们看到他们的得分是如此低时,他们知道了好好学习和专心学习的重要性.他们决定努力学习
可能有不对,英文部分的大写你要自己区分了,呵呵