用there be句型写一篇英语小短文，关于我的家庭 六年级的

我刚在写的

My family
I have a happy family. My family have five poeple:grandpa, grandma, father, mother, and me.
My grandparents live in countryside. They have six rooms. The room is big. There are two apple in the ground. They have sixteen goats and three cows. The goat is white. The cow is yellow. They are healthy.
My parents and me live in city. My father is a worker. His work is hard. My mother is a high school's Chinese teacher, She take bicycle go to work at seven'clock. In the afternoon, she doesn't go home. In the evening, she make supper. The food is delicious. I am a student. I have Chinese, math and English everyday. That is boring. I have many friends. After class, I play with my friends.
We are tried, but we are very happy. I love my family

我刚刚才发给别人

给个采纳撒

那你先给个采纳撒。晕死

你都不给采纳。。

算了，我不发了