假设你是李华,你刚参加了某培训学校组织的“英语夏令营”活动,请根据以下内容,写一封投诉信.
假设你是李华,你刚参加了某培训学校组织的“英语夏令营”活动,请根据以下内容,写一封投诉信.
[写作内容]
1、原以为可以通过这个课程提高英语成绩,但一个班有60多个学生,学生练习的机会大大减少；
2、课程内容简单,话题不够新颖,难以调动学生英语学习的兴趣；
3、学校没有午餐供应,每天都要走30分钟的路程,到最近的饭店吃饭；
4、学校曾在广告中宣传,会组织丰富的实践活动,但学校仅组织了一次羽毛球比赛；
5、描述你参加该活动后的心情和提出你的赔偿要求.
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总句数）.
不要范文.要自己写的阿
[写作内容]
1、原以为可以通过这个课程提高英语成绩,但一个班有60多个学生,学生练习的机会大大减少；
2、课程内容简单,话题不够新颖,难以调动学生英语学习的兴趣；
3、学校没有午餐供应,每天都要走30分钟的路程,到最近的饭店吃饭；
4、学校曾在广告中宣传,会组织丰富的实践活动,但学校仅组织了一次羽毛球比赛；
5、描述你参加该活动后的心情和提出你的赔偿要求.
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总句数）.
不要范文.要自己写的阿
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Dear Editor,
I have joined an English summer camp recently but I am very disappointed because the organiser didn't keep their promise. I had wanted to improve my English by joining in the camp but there were 60 students in a class so we had few chances to practise our English. Besides, the lessons were easy and the topics are out of date ,which couldn't arouse students's interest in English. What's more, there was no lunch at the school so we had to walk thirty minutes to have meals at the nearest restaurant. The school had promised a variety of activities in the advertisement but they actually only organised one badminton match.
In a word, I am very disappointed and dissatisfied with the camp ,so I submit a claim for compensation here. Please help me.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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I have joined an English summer camp recently but I am very disappointed because the organiser didn't keep their promise. I had wanted to improve my English by joining in the camp but there were 60 students in a class so we had few chances to practise our English. Besides, the lessons were easy and the topics are out of date ,which couldn't arouse students's interest in English. What's more, there was no lunch at the school so we had to walk thirty minutes to have meals at the nearest restaurant. The school had promised a variety of activities in the advertisement but they actually only organised one badminton match.
In a word, I am very disappointed and dissatisfied with the camp ,so I submit a claim for compensation here. Please help me.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
我自己写的,仅供参考吧!
1年前
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