中译英,请帮忙看看语法是否正确,第二句请帮吗翻译,机票预定已经完成.请确认下名字,证件号码和起飞日期和时间是否正确.可以

为你提供修改并将其余部分译成正确的英文：
The air ticket has been booked.Please kindly verify if the passenger‘s name,ID number and departure date/time are correct.You may check in directly with passport without a paper ticket.You may also print out the ticket for your own reference.
请留意,以上译文只用了单数.如指两人以上,可用以下译文：
The air tickets have been booked.Please kindly verify if the passengers' names,ID numbers and departure date/time are correct.You may check in directly with passports without paper tickets.You may also print out the tickets for your own reference.

正确的应该如下，由于是"你们＂，所以是复数
The tickets are booked. Please check if the names, ID number, the departure date and time are correct. You could check in directly at the airport with your passports. Paper ticket are not needed, but you could print them for your own reference.

The ticket booking process has been successful. Please check the name , number of ID card and the time of departure of the flight .You can board the pane with your passport. The plane ticket is not a must when boarding. You can get it typed for your own reference.

The ticket booking process has 【been】 finished, please 【check】 【passenger's name】, ID number, 【departure date】if 【it】is correct.