将下列英语短文进行改错dear editor i'm wring to tell you about how we st
将下列英语短文进行改错
dear editor i'm wring to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life some use
them in a good way when some others don't.as far as i am concerned,more ahd more students now use computers help with their study.if we meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always got help from the internet.to spend their spare time,they look for more informations with the computers to have much more knowledge.at the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatted with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study .they really in dangerous.that is how we mainly use computers.they can either do good and harm to
dear editor i'm wring to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life some use
them in a good way when some others don't.as far as i am concerned,more ahd more students now use computers help with their study.if we meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always got help from the internet.to spend their spare time,they look for more informations with the computers to have much more knowledge.at the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatted with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study .they really in dangerous.that is how we mainly use computers.they can either do good and harm to
赞 glbmao 春芽
共回答了19个问题采纳率：94.7% 举报
第一,这篇作文每一句打头词的第一位字母都必须改成大写.
有些句子不同我也稍稍改或加了一些词.
以下是我自己改过的,应该没有错.:3
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life.Some use
them in a good way when some others don't.
As far as i am concerned,more and more students now use computers to help with their study.If they meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always get help from the internet.
To spend their spare time,they look for more information with the computers to have much more knowledge.At the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatting with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study.They are really in danger.
That is how we mainly use computers.They can either do both good or harm to us.
不知道是不是你要的.
有些句子不同我也稍稍改或加了一些词.
以下是我自己改过的,应该没有错.:3
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life.Some use
them in a good way when some others don't.
As far as i am concerned,more and more students now use computers to help with their study.If they meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always get help from the internet.
To spend their spare time,they look for more information with the computers to have much more knowledge.At the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatting with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study.They are really in danger.
That is how we mainly use computers.They can either do both good or harm to us.
不知道是不是你要的.
1年前
1
xiaochao1986 幼苗
共回答了5个问题 举报
第二行when改为while 第三行help前加to，we改为they 第四行got改为get look for 最好改为search
第五行informations改为单数，at the same最好去掉, the 变a
第六行chatted变chatting, that前加so(最好用lead to,不确定so that能否用于否定意义的以致于）
第五行informations改为单数，at the same最好去掉, the 变a
第六行chatted变chatting, that前加so(最好用lead to,不确定so that能否用于否定意义的以致于）
1年前
0
可能相似的问题
你能帮帮他们吗