帮我修改一下,增加复杂句子,As anold saying goes “No enemy is not a father

帮我修改一下,增加复杂句子,
As anold saying goes “No enemy is not a father and son.” Recently,we often hear ofthe complaints about how their parents misunderstand them and the problem ofgeneration-gap from the classmates.This is a big problem between us and ourparents.
If I were aparent,I would try to communicate with my child.I wouldn't say I was not likethis or that.I would make him choose what he likes such as choosing his ownclothes and making his friends.And I'd give him enough time to have fun and toencourage him to develop his hobbies such as watching TV or listening tomusic.Though he does something wrong,Iwouldn't always complain about him,I'd have the patience to listen to hisexplains and I'd try my parents' best to protect him and love him.I hope hecan have a good childhood.The most important thing is that I would set a goodexample for him and hope to win his respect.
I hope he cangrow up happily and healthily like a little bird,even without me,he can alsobrave to fly in the sky and to face all the trouble.
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芊子 幼苗

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写得非常好,看不出有什么需要大改动的.有两处建议你稍微处理一下(估计是笔误):
Though he does something wrong ——> 将 Though 换成 Even if
he can also brave to fly ——> 加一个 be 和 enough:he can also be brave enough to fly.

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zhaixinjun 幼苗

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As an old proverb goes /says: All the fathers and sons are like enemies who can't make any compromises /concessions in many aspects . Recently.We often overheard such compaints and grievances as the m...

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