求大神给我写英语改错 It was hot last Sunday .My father to

求大神给我写英语改错 It was hot last Sunday .My father to
求大神给我写英语改错 It was hot last Sunday .My father took me to go swimming in a swimming poor in a university .Since I was only a beginner .I swam in the shallow water .Therefore after a while ,out of his curiosity I wanted to swim in the deep water .Then my bad luck came When I swam there ,I was nervous that the swimming ring sudden slipped out of my hand .I began to sink ,drinking a lot of water .That was my father who came as quickly as possible and saved me .How a dangerous experience It warns of of that I should always put safety first and ever take unnecessary risks .