改错,一共有5处错误 帮我找找迈,拜托咯,急求!

改错,一共有5处错误 帮我找找迈,拜托咯,急求!
The day before the speech contest my English teacher talked to me.She said that she and my schoolmatewished me success,but it did not matter that I would win or not.
When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous that a leaf.There were so many people present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.She was smiling but nodding at me.I remembered her words and calmed down,I did a good job and won the first prize .Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.Whenever I see them I will think of my English teacher.
东北张阔 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

cherrside 幼苗

共回答了16个问题采纳率:87.5% 举报

1.whether I would win or not
2.like a leaf
3.caught sight of
4.smiling and nodding
5.are hanging

1年前

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zgq416 幼苗

共回答了42个问题 举报

1.schoolmate改为schoolmates.
2.that I would win or not改为whether I would win or not
3.that a leaf中间短了一些词,应该是:that I shook like a leaf.
4.caught a sight of 改为:caught sight of ,这是固定短语。
5.第5...

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