英语短文改错!急急急!A woman in a shabby coat entered into an expensiv
英语短文改错!急急急!
A woman in a shabby coat entered into an expensive shop and asked to see a dress that was on the window. The assistant served her did not like the way she was dressed. He told her that the dress sold.The woman angry walked out of the shop. She returned back the shop the following morning dressed in a fur coat,but after finding the rude assistant she asked for the same dress.Not realized who she was, the assistant was eager to serve her this time. With great difficult,he climbed into the shop window to get the dress,As soon as she saw it, thewoman said that she did not like it. She enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window after finally buying the dress she had first asked for.
A woman in a shabby coat entered into an expensive shop and asked to see a dress that was on the window. The assistant served her did not like the way she was dressed. He told her that the dress sold.The woman angry walked out of the shop. She returned back the shop the following morning dressed in a fur coat,but after finding the rude assistant she asked for the same dress.Not realized who she was, the assistant was eager to serve her this time. With great difficult,he climbed into the shop window to get the dress,As soon as she saw it, thewoman said that she did not like it. She enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window after finally buying the dress she had first asked for.
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A woman in a shabby coat entered (去掉into) an expensive shop and asked to see a dress that was (on改成in) the window. The assistant (served改成serving 或 在served前面加上who) her did not like the way she was dressed. He told her that the dress (加入was) sold. The woman (angry改成angrily) walked out of the shop. She returned (back改成to) the shop the following morning dressed in a fur coat, (but改成and) after finding the rude assistant she asked for the same dress. Not (realized改成realizing) who she was, the assistant was eager to serve her this time. With great (difficult改成difficulty), he climbed into the shop window to get the dress, As soon as she saw it, the woman said that she did not like it. She enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window (after改成before) finally buying the dress she had first asked for.
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A woman in a shabby coat entered (去掉into) an expensive shop and asked to see a dress that was (on改成in) the window. The assistant (served改成serving 或 在served前面加上who) her did not like the way she was dressed. He told her that the dress (加入was) sold. The woman (angry改成angrily) walked out of the shop. She returned (back改成to) the shop the following morning dressed in a fur coat, (but改成and) after finding the rude assistant she asked for the same dress. Not (realized改成realizing) who she was, the assistant was eager to serve her this time. With great (difficult改成difficulty), he climbed into the shop window to get the dress, As soon as she saw it, the woman said that she did not like it. She enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window (after改成before) finally buying the dress she had first asked for.
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