各位帮帮忙,请修改下这2篇作文,注意（ 将来时态“将要”或“会+诉”） 第一篇：My Winter Vacation I

各位帮帮忙,请修改下这2篇作文,注意（ 将来时态“将要”或“会+诉”） 第一篇：My Winter Vacation I ha
第二篇：
Keep the School Tidy and Clean
Good afternoon, everyone!
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. We don't spit in public. We shouldn't leave rubbish here and there. Don't draw pictures on the wall. Turn off the lights when you leave a class room. We should Wipe a blackboard when after class. We should clean classroom after school. In short
we should keep the school tidy and clean . The school must become more and more beautiful !
That's all . Thank you.
第一篇补充：
My Winter Vacation
I have a happy winter vacation . I wake up 8-9 o'clock every day . I do some homeworks and read some books. Not only the holiday ,bur also we must stick to study . We are about to come Spring Festival . I'm happy very much. In the Spring Festival I and my friends go to play the Fu Zhou. I'm go to kTV singing song . After we going to Zuo Hai park . We like go to undersea world but the ticket is expensive very much. We also going to "Three alleys and seven lanes". There is lively very much , we even eat some delicious snacks . In short , we very happy in Spring Festival . I'm looking forward to this day . After Spring Festival we can going on to learn ,and finish my homework . This is my winter vacation. What about you ?