帮我检查一下英文文法是否正确..

帮我检查一下英文文法是否正确..
In June 20,1993,there was a baby that was just born in GuandDong,China,which is me.My name is SenWei Me.My whole family migranted to America in June 24,2007.I love America,becasue America is beautiful and the people in America are nice.
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In June 20,1993,a baby who was me was born in GuandDong,China,My name is SenWei Me.My whole family migrated to America in June 24,2007.I love America and America is beautiful and the people in America are nice.
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in June 20,1993,there was a baby who was just born in GuangDong,china, that is me, my name is SenWeime,my whole family migrated to American in june 24,2007, i love America, because America is a beautiful place and the people here are very nice.

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In June 20, 1993, i was born in GuangDong, China. My name is Sen Weime. And my whole family migrated to America in June 24, 2007. I love America, because America is beautiful, and the people in America are nice.

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