高分求80字英语作文一篇根据以下要求扩写成一篇英语短文,短文需要包括以下几点.字数60——80字1、李丽身材高挑,留着一

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Lili is very tall,she has long black hair.She is a beautiful girl.She'd like to sing popular songs when she feels happy.She has a lot of hobbies:playing tennies; travelling by train when she's on vacation.She likes to make friends and chat over the phone.She usually spends one hour on the telephone.She also goes to the cinema with her friends when she is free.Lili is a nice girl,everybody loves to be her friend.
原文翻译:李丽身材高挑,留黑色长发.她是个美丽到女孩.她感到开心的时候就喜欢唱流行歌曲.她有很多爱好:网球; 放假时乘火车旅行.她喜欢交朋友,电话聊天.她通常在电话里能聊一个小时的天.她有空的时候也会跟朋友去看电影.李丽是个不错的女孩,所有人都乐意做她的朋友.
题外话:不是我挖墙脚,之前很多人写的都有问题:比如,人的高怎么能用high形容呢?应该是tall.还有on the phone,over the phone是正确的用法,不是 on phone.
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