请问这句话,语法有错么As time went on,the dreams of the past have gone

请问这句话,语法有错么
As time went on,the dreams of the past have gone away from me.
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依然_在线 幼苗

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As time went on,their hopes began to wane.
随着时间的消逝,他们的希望开始变得渺茫
建议用一般过去时态
As time went on,the dreams of the past went away from me.

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LAGIRLANNY 幼苗

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As time went on, the dreams of the past have(had) gone away from me.

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as time goes by, my dreams in the past has gone away.

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谁曾伤天害理 幼苗

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have 改成had，过去完成时态

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asdfghaekjtrth 幼苗

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说 As time goes by, the dreams of the past have gone away from me. 更好。

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