英语 改错 救额I am excited to have accepted an e-mail from you .I

英语 改错 救额
I am excited to have accepted an e-mail from you .I am glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese .I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me .How time flies Our friendship has lasted for several months .We have got to know but learned a lot from each other .Yes ,it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from me .Thanks again for writing to me .I am looking forword to hearing from you soon .Best wishes to you and your family .共有九处错 好人那
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liaoyp 幼苗

共回答了13个问题采纳率:92.3% 举报

accepted ------ received
good Chinese ------- in Chinese fluently
read your e-mail to my parents -------read your e-mail for my parents
show-----showed
you sent it to me ---------you sent to me
has lasted for -----------has been lasting for
got to know but learned --------------got to know and learned
.yes,---------------------,although
clearly------------clear
quite different from me---------quite different from mine
Thanks again for writing to me ---------------thank you for writting to me 不要用again,原句太中式

1年前

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wooql 幼苗

共回答了3个问题 举报

1.第二行,in good Chinese,少了介词 in
2.第四行,it is clearly 改为 it is clear
3.第一行,accepted 该为received,accept表示主观意愿的接受,而receive是指客观上的收到
4.第一行,glad 后面加that, i am glad后面是表语从句,需要加that
5.第五行的but 改为and...

1年前

1

lcnhbydcz 幼苗

共回答了8个问题 举报

应该是这样的:I am excited that I have received an e-mail from you .I am glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail well in Chinese .I read your e-mail for my parents and showed ...

1年前

1

wangli1028 幼苗

共回答了140个问题 举报

accepted→received,
good Chinese→well,
show→showed,
the photo you sent it →去掉 it,
got to know but→but改成and,
we have got 去掉have
Yes→?
clearly →obviously,
different from me→me改成mine,
求最后答案

1年前

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