英语 改错 救额I am excited to have accepted an e-mail from you .I
英语 改错 救额 I am excited to have accepted an e-mail from you .I am glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese .I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me .How time flies Our friendship has lasted for several months .We have got to know but learned a lot from each other .Yes ,it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from me .Thanks again for writing to me .I am looking forword to hearing from you soon .Best wishes to you and your family .共有九处错 好人那
accepted ------ received good Chinese ------- in Chinese fluently read your e-mail to my parents -------read your e-mail for my parents show-----showed you sent it to me ---------you sent to me has lasted for -----------has been lasting for got to know but learned --------------got to know and learned .yes,---------------------,although clearly------------clear quite different from me---------quite different from mine Thanks again for writing to me ---------------thank you for writting to me 不要用again,原句太中式
1.第二行,in good Chinese,少了介词 in 2.第四行,it is clearly 改为 it is clear 3.第一行,accepted 该为received,accept表示主观意愿的接受,而receive是指客观上的收到 4.第一行,glad 后面加that, i am glad后面是表语从句,需要加that 5.第五行的but 改为and...
应该是这样的:I am excited that I have received an e-mail from you .I am glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail well in Chinese .I read your e-mail for my parents and showed ...
accepted→received, good Chinese→well, show→showed, the photo you sent it →去掉 it, got to know but→but改成and, we have got 去掉have Yes→? clearly →obviously, different from me→me改成mine, 求最后答案