能指出这篇英语短文的语法错误吗?

能指出这篇英语短文的语法错误吗?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for letter and samples sent on Sep 10.We are glad to inform you that Our customers are very satisfied with the rest result of your samples,but they still hesitating at the moment.
After careful comparison with similar goods,we find your quotation on the high side,the current in a product market is swollen up with various brands and quality brands such a brand,which are easily available.These brands have already gained recognition of the local market
Although its quality has already measured up to our customers’ requirements,it still needs price advantage in order to open up a market here.Otherwise it can hardly compete against the established brands
In view of this,our customers request you to reduce your original by 10%.Please consider this and give us a prompt reply.
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469522080 幼苗

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dear sir or madam,
thank you for letters and samples you sent on sep 10.glad to inform you that our customers are very satisfied with the rest result of your samples,but they are still hesitating.after carefully compared with other products,we found your quotation is higher,market is swollen up with various brands available.these brands have already gained recognition of local market.although the quality has already measured up to customer's requirements,the products need price advantage to open up a market.otherwise it can hardly compete against established brands.
in view of this,customers request you to reduce your original by 10%.please consider this and reply us promptly.

1年前

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xbcuj2 幼苗

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1. Thank you for your letter and samples......
2. ...with the rest results of your samples
3. ...but they are still hesitating at the moment.
4. After careful comparisons with similar goods,
5. ...which is easily available

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wuhe 幼苗

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源自于水 幼苗

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为什么第一个or不用and

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柳絮絮飞 幼苗

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but they still hesitating at the moment改成but they are still hesitating at the moment
其他应该没什么问题吧。。

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