Date对方地址Dear sir,Re:Packing for “Guangshi”MooncakeThank you

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Dear sir,
Re:Packing for “Guangshi”Mooncake
Thank you for your proposal of regarding the packing of our order for ready-made “Guangshi” Mooncake.We’d like to confirm our packing requirments as follows:
First,each mooncake should be packed in plastic bag so that the products can be seen directly,then each bag must be filled with nitrogen(氮气) in the inner,which can extend quality guarantee period of the products,10 bags to a exquisite case next,which will help to promote the sales.In order to save more safe,50 cases to a cardboard carton.The cartons should be strong enough against rough handing and long ocean transportation.
Please pack the goods strictly.As the Mid-Autumn festival is coming,please speed up shipment for us to catch it.
Yours faithfully,
Jet
Manager
xiao1u 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

Ω魚ル飞飛oO 幼苗

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1)proposal of regarding 中of 删掉.或者是删掉regarding
2)with nitrogen(氮气) in the inner,可以改成with nitrogen inside.虽然没有什么语法错误,但是感觉还是不够简洁
3) save more safe
整体到没什么语法错误,只是看起来很中式.所以读起来感觉不是很好.

1年前

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biyufei 幼苗

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过去进行时

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hendy1981 春芽

共回答了18个问题采纳率:83.3% 举报

-no need directly
-filled with nitrogen -no need can be seen..
-which can maintain the quality ...
-carton should be tough/safe enough
-long journey transportation...

1年前

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