改错 I yah born in Shanghai,but I lived in beijing for the pas
改错 I yah born in Shanghai,but I lived in beijing for the past ten years.I moved here because...
改错 I yah born in Shanghai,but I lived in beijing for the past ten years.I moved here because I wanted be nearer to my grandparents.I trained for a nurse after I left school,so I haven't actually found a job in nursing yet.At the moment I'm doing temporary work in an office but I'm think of taking a year off to travel and saw the world.
改错 I yah born in Shanghai,but I lived in beijing for the past ten years.I moved here because I wanted be nearer to my grandparents.I trained for a nurse after I left school,so I haven't actually found a job in nursing yet.At the moment I'm doing temporary work in an office but I'm think of taking a year off to travel and saw the world.
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I yah（was） born in Shanghai,but I lived in Beijing for the past ten years.I moved here because I wanted be nearer to my grandparents.I trained for(as) a nurse after I left school,so(but) I haven't actually found a job in nursing yet.At the moment I'm doing temporary work in an office but I'm think(thinking) of(about) taking a year off to travel and saw(see) the world.
I yah（was） born in Shanghai,but I lived in Beijing for the past ten years.I moved here because I wanted be nearer to my grandparents.I trained for(as) a nurse after I left school,so(but) I haven't actually found a job in nursing yet.At the moment I'm doing temporary work in an office but I'm think(thinking) of(about) taking a year off to travel and saw(see) the world.
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