短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文. 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said,"That's it.No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on. ____________________________________________________________________________ |
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