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| 短文改错. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉. 修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分. |
| This autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camping.We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains.We set up our tents on the sandy beach.When night fell,we started a fire to give we light and kept us warm.All my classmates sat around them,talking,singing and laughing.Several hours late,Robert and I went back the tent to have the chat.We stayed up all night.We found that we two had a lot of in common.The fire and stars saw our happy and friendship.What I wished time would stop at the moment! ________________________________________________________________________________________ |
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This autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camping.We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view
1.good
of the sea and mountains.We set up our tents on the sandy beach.When night fell,we started a fire to give
we light and kept us warm.All my classmates sat around them ,talking,singing and laughing.Several hours
2.us 3.keep 4. it
l ate ,Robert and I went back∧ the tent to have the chat.We stayed up all night.We found that we two had a
5.later 6.to 7.a
lot of in common.The fire and stars saw our happy and friendship. What I wished time would stop at the
8.去掉 9. happiness 10.How
moment!
1.good
of the sea and mountains.We set up our tents on the sandy beach.When night fell,we started a fire to give
we light and kept us warm.All my classmates sat around them ,talking,singing and laughing.Several hours
2.us 3.keep 4. it
l ate ,Robert and I went back∧ the tent to have the chat.We stayed up all night.We found that we two had a
5.later 6.to 7.a
lot of in common.The fire and stars saw our happy and friendship. What I wished time would stop at the
8.去掉 9. happiness 10.How
moment!
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