英语作文修改Life likes a sky.It may be sunny or rainy and it never

Life likes weather.（生活应该像天气,不应该像天空）It may be sunny or rainy sometimes,but it will never be continuing for a long time.So how can we do when we are in trouble ande how to deal with it
First,when you find you have made a mistake.这里既然用完成时,过去分词就应该有Do not ask for help to others at once.You should try to deal with by yourself which can make you grow up and learn someting new quickly.(这里我给你改了用定语从句这样更好,分数会更高)
Second ,if you find it is difficult to you to solve the problem .Don't hesitate turning (犹豫做某事应该用动词ING形式) to your friends for help.It is a easy for them to help you out of trouble.Don't be shy(基本上没有说FEEL SHY 的 都是 BE SHY.) and you can help others when they are in trouble .
Everyone has different ways( 不同的方式,方式用复数） to solve the problem.The theory depends on themselves .So,find a way which is suitable(这里应该用适合的形容词形式） for you and keep a brave heart everytime（这是我给你改好了的,若是还有疑问就请再问我,以后有什么困难也可以找我,我会尽力帮你解答的）

Life is like sky. It may be sunny or rainy and it never lasts for a long time.So what can we do when we get in trouble? How to deal with it?
First, when you find you made a mistake. Do not ask...

Life is like the weather. (westerners are more common to use weather because it is the weather that changes, sky is always sky) It can be either sunny or rainy but never lasts long. It is just like li...

Life [is like the] sky. It may be sunny or rainy [but] it never [continues for a] long time.[我觉得前后没有因果关系]So [what] can we do when we [get into] a trouble? [or how to deal with it.我觉得有点多余]
First...