Most people like using short-cuts.We all usually want to get

Most people like using short-cuts.We all usually want to get from A to B as quickly as possible,and when we want to get our messages across to people who have the same job as ours,we often use jargon (行话).It’s a kind of short-cut that helps us communicate without wasting time.Jargon is simply a kind of language shorthand that lets us say what we mean quickly.
In the business world,you might expect to hear or use a lot of jargon.However,a report in Britain claims that most managers overuse business jargon and that this has a negative effect on how staff feel.
Most employees in Britain,according to this survey,have a low opinion of the colleagues who use management jargon.Over a third of those surveyed think it shows a lack of confidence and almost one in five think people who use it are untrustworthy or trying to cover something up.
Some of the most overused business expressions were:get our ducks in a row (have everything arranged efficiently),brain dump (tell everything you know about a particular subject) and think outside the box (be creative in how you think about problems).
Peter Russian from Investors in People says that an effective boss is one who can communicate in a way which everyone can easily understand,not one who __________________.
So now that you’ve got an overview of business jargon,it’s time to give you a warning not to overuse this jargon to speak.But that’s a real no-brainer,isn’t it?
76.What is the best title of the passage?(Please answer within 7 words.)
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正确答案是Managers overuse business language.我的答案是Don't overuse jargon to speak.从第一段看出,应不光是生意界吧?
而且文章的重点在于警告不要乱用jargon,答案明显不合适吧.还有翻译最后一段,
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第一段只是引子,介绍一下什么情况人们使用jargon.title题型你要把视角放在全文,看整篇文章讲了什么.后面都是在论述生意界的问题.
首先感谢你的追问.对知识有钻研精神是非常好的.很高兴能和你探讨这个问题.
你提到了文章的重点在于警告不要乱用jargon,这一点我不赞同,因为只在文章的结尾提到了一下.就像我们一般写文章在结尾我们都要提到对未来的展望,对大家的要求等等,这只是起了一个升华主题的作用,不能作为文章标题的依据.我觉得文章中有个关键字jargon没有在答案给的标题中体现出来,如果标题改为Managers overuse business jargon会更恰当.我们可以这么想,如果给你一篇命题作文,题目是Managers overuse business jargon,你会怎么写这篇文章?是不是第一段首先介绍什么是“jargon”,然后下面给出具体的证据和事例阐述overuse business jargon这个现象,然后可以花少量篇幅给出这种现象的危害以及给人们的倡议.若如你所说,将最后给人们的倡议作为标题,会有失偏颇.所以我认为标题为Managers overuse business jargon会更好.
最后一段的翻译:既然你现在已经对商业行话有一个整体的概念,现在是时候给你一个忠告:说话时不要过多使用行话.不过这是无需用脑的事(不过这并不难做到),不是么?

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