考研作文长难句原句：A young man wearing a white mask and a red scarf i
考研作文长难句
原句：A young man wearing a white mask and a red scarf is staring at the huge character 'pm 2.5' in the polluted sky.
我的改写：Wearing a white mask and a red scarf,a young man is staring at the huge character 'pm 2.5' in the polluted sky.
这样算不算增色了一些啊?
原句：A young man wearing a white mask and a red scarf is staring at the huge character 'pm 2.5' in the polluted sky.
我的改写：Wearing a white mask and a red scarf,a young man is staring at the huge character 'pm 2.5' in the polluted sky.
这样算不算增色了一些啊?
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