英语翻译当我睁开眼睛的时候我希望都能见到你..自己翻的是“I wish to see you when I open m

你翻译的非常好.
其它的说法包括：
I wish you are right in front of me when I open my eyes.
I hope to see you in front of me when I open my eyes.
如果要强调”都“的话,可以这样说：
I wish to see you always when I open my eyes.
I wish to see you every time that I open my eyes.
楼上说的I wish to see you whenever I open my eyes 也可以,不过听起来有些”强迫“人的感觉,更有这个意思：我随时睁开眼都希望你在我面前.

建议将“when”改为whenever ,强调"每次都"。把to改成I

你的答案基本达意，但是不够完美。最好说：
When I open my eyes in the morning, I wish I could see you.
When I wake up in the morning, I wish you were still there.
When I wake up /open my eyes in the morning, I ...

I wish I can see you whenever open my eyes.