自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~
自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~
selfless mother love
I can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for herself once a year.
No matter how tired she is ,if I want to do sth,she always play with me.
At last,I want to tell everybody my mother is good at everyting,she is amazing enough to protect me
selfless mother love
I can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for herself once a year.
No matter how tired she is ,if I want to do sth,she always play with me.
At last,I want to tell everybody my mother is good at everyting,she is amazing enough to protect me
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语法上没什么问题,但写得有点中国式了.
我试着修改一下：
I can't find a person like my mother who always gives me many expensive gifts,but she often buys cheap chothes for herself,Besides, she always satisfies me no matter how hard for her,And she plays with me no matter how tired she is.
At last,I want to tell all of you that my mother is good at everything in my eyes,
最后一句,我不太明白你想表达些什么,觉得句子前后不太连贯.
我试着修改一下：
I can't find a person like my mother who always gives me many expensive gifts,but she often buys cheap chothes for herself,Besides, she always satisfies me no matter how hard for her,And she plays with me no matter how tired she is.
At last,I want to tell all of you that my mother is good at everything in my eyes,
最后一句,我不太明白你想表达些什么,觉得句子前后不太连贯.
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