英语作文shopping on line has many advantages .first ,you can buy

英语作文
shopping on line has many advantages .first ,you can buy goods what you are interested inwithout going outdoors .second,shopping on line not only can save time ,but also can aviod crowding in the crowd ,and tiring during go shopping .Third ,the price of goods online usually much lower than store.So you can save money .Fourh,you can choose a lot of goods ,and you can choose all kinds of goods .However ,shopping on line also has some disadvantages such as you just can see the picture of goods ,but you can't see itselves .Some people are worried about the quality of goods .you may buy lots of goods that you don't need on line ,it caused wasting.
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