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if at all:如果还会的话.
我们依然是控制所有事情的一方,但是在人类的智慧在缓慢地进步的同时(如果人类的智慧还在进步的话),电脑的功能正在以极快的速度进步着.
以下是语法及语气中不适当的地方:
we are still in control,but the capabilities of computer are increasing at a fantastic (diction:"alarming" would be better) rate,while raw What are we,raw materials?) human intelligence is changing What is this?We don't "change" we "improve") slowly,if at all.
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