请英语高手帮帮忙看看有什么不妥这是我儿子写的开场白,后天他要去决赛,请指教(Good evening,everyone.
请英语高手帮帮忙看看有什么不妥
这是我儿子写的开场白,后天他要去决赛,请指教
(Good evening,everyone.) My name is Shawn.I’m a nine-year-old boy.Last year,I entered for this contest and won the third prize.At the time I told myself that I would come back again and do better.And now,you see,I’m really here,this time I will recite the New Concept english the third.But even if I failed,I will try my best.During last year,I have read a large number of interesting English books like the last of the Mohicans,the tragedy of Dr Faustus,Robin Hood,Hamlet,Robinson Crusoe and so on.These made me crazy about English.I have become a program fan now.I love programming Turbo Pascal,Flash and Delphie7.My dream is to be a computer programmer like Bill Gates.This is me,a lovely and brilliant boy.Thanks everyone!
新概念第三册，用英语怎么说？
这是我儿子写的开场白,后天他要去决赛,请指教
(Good evening,everyone.) My name is Shawn.I’m a nine-year-old boy.Last year,I entered for this contest and won the third prize.At the time I told myself that I would come back again and do better.And now,you see,I’m really here,this time I will recite the New Concept english the third.But even if I failed,I will try my best.During last year,I have read a large number of interesting English books like the last of the Mohicans,the tragedy of Dr Faustus,Robin Hood,Hamlet,Robinson Crusoe and so on.These made me crazy about English.I have become a program fan now.I love programming Turbo Pascal,Flash and Delphie7.My dream is to be a computer programmer like Bill Gates.This is me,a lovely and brilliant boy.Thanks everyone!
新概念第三册，用英语怎么说？
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(Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.) My name is Shawn.I’m a nine-year-old boy.I was very lucky to participate in this contest and won the third place in the last year.At that time I told myself that I would come back again and do the better.And now,just as you see,I’m here,this time I will recite the New Concept english book 3.no matter I fail or not ,I will try my best.During last year,I have read a large numbers of interesting English books ,such as the last of the Mohicans,the tragedy of Dr Faustus,Robin Hood,Hamlet,Robinson Crusoe and so on.These made me be crazy about English.And I have the interesting in the program of computer.I love programming Turbo Pascal,Flash and Delphie7.My dream is to be a computer programmer like Bill Gates.This is me,a lovely and smart boy.Thank you!
请注意观察我所改动的地方!希望能帮到孩子!注意语气语调!关键是断句要准确!相信你的孩子一定能成功!好苗子要好好培养!如有帮助可以和我联系,taoxue123@163.com
请注意观察我所改动的地方!希望能帮到孩子!注意语气语调!关键是断句要准确!相信你的孩子一定能成功!好苗子要好好培养!如有帮助可以和我联系,taoxue123@163.com
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