在线等，有高手可以帮我看下这段英语翻译有没语法错误吗？急！有关暮光之城的

在线等，有高手可以帮我看下这段英语翻译有没语法错误吗？急！有关暮光之城的
The book hero is a smart young girl with a heart of fire, and this incredibly and deadly attractive vampire, they life intersect at this small rainy and cloudy town. something that is destined is about to happen.
Bella has fallen in love incurably with this vampire, and the vampire with this pure-hearted beautiful girl. but can he control his thirst for blood and stay by her side? is bella's so firm that she would risk her life for the sake of it? they did, because love is stronger than anything any mankind can imagine!
本书主角是一个聪明的女孩，有着火一样的心，另一个是美的让人窒息，迷人的难以置信的吸血鬼，他们的命运就在这个阴雨连绵的小镇上相交汇了。
贝拉无可救药的爱上了吸血鬼爱德华，爱德华也爱上了这个天使般纯洁心灵的女孩儿。但是他能够控制住对她鲜血的渴望吗？在她的身边守护着她吗？贝拉会不会为了忠贞的爱情而坚定的呆在爱德华身旁，即使冒着生命的危险？是的，因为爱情如此的强大，它超出了人和凡人的想象！