how was your winter holiday(作文)

like the winter holiday every year.Last winter I went to Beijing for my holiday,Beijing is our capital city.I went to the winter Palace,climbed the Great Wall and went to many places of interest.I had a very good time.During this winter holiday,I went to Putuo and Xiangshan.I saw the beautiful sea.I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the moonlight.It's really "cool".When I at home,I do my homework in the morning.In the afternoon I practise playing the piano.But in the evening I can watch TV after a long walk with my parents.If you ask me what my favourite winter holiday will be like,traveling around the world is the only answer.I like travelling so much that l often meet different people and visit different places of interest in my dream.I wish I can have two winter holidays in a year.

"大白菜嫩嫩"的作文中:
"When I at home" 应改为 "When I'm at home" 不过这几句应该是过去式吧!
最后一句"I wish I can" 应改为 "I wish I could"