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last summer holiday,i took a trip to yunnan.it is in the southern part
of our country .it is really a very beautiful place--grand mountains,
clean rivers and kind people.trees and flowers are seen everywhere.
every year there are lots and lots of visitors.
i also went to li jiang.the roads in that city are just like the eight
diagrams.any road in the city goes to the center of li jiang.a river
runs through the whole city.if you go along the river,you’ll never get
lost.there are many ethnic minority people in yunnan.they are very
cordial.and they all like singing and dancing.
All in all,the trip to yunnan impressed me greatly.i will never forget it.