七年级英语下册第五单元P27 PALRWORK 连成一篇作文

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Look!There is a man in the supermarket.He is taking a bottle of milk.He is a thief.Now,he is waiting for a bus and reading a newspaper.Ben and Tim are talking to a policewoman.They are talking about the thief.They are all going to the police station.The man is crying.But Ben and Tim are happy.
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Look!There is a man in the supermarket.He is taking a bottle of milk.He is a thief.Now,he is waiting for a bus and reading a newspaper.Ben and Tim are talking to a policewoman.They are talking about the thief.They are all going to the police station.The man is crying.But Ben and Tim are happy.

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