我同学在考英语,题目是“假如我是销售部王明,写信给约翰,内容1,感谢对方订购我公司的最新产品,2.所订购的货物已发出,大

Dear john,
Thanks a lot for your order of our latest product.
非常感谢订购我司最新产品
The products have been shipped.And you can receive them in a week or so.
货物已经发出,大约一周后到达贵司
please let me know when you receive them.
货物到达后再烦请通知我
We appreciate your business and we shall be interested in your comments.
非常感谢本次交易；欢迎贵司多提出宝贵意见
We will continue to do all we can to develop a stronger working relationship between our companies.
我们将尽我们所能事我们两家公司的商务合作关系更加紧密

觉得第一个翻译已经很准确啦.可以采纳他的/