短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作

短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除和修改
增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:
1.每处错误极其修改均限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不记分
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can
help you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The
first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to
make friends than any words. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking
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h a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you. You can discuss your
studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you
should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as
possibly.
Yours,
Lily
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Your problem is ∧common one among middle school students．Maybe the
1. a
following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest
2. advice 3. of
problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile
4. 去掉
at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than
5. louder
any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him ．Next, trying talking
6. them 7. try
with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You
8. shares
can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your
hobbies． Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．
9. If
Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
10. possible

1年前

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