自己写的英语打油诗``帮忙修改一下

自己写的英语打油诗``帮忙修改一下
Although I practiced math every day.
I got a sad grad.
It nearly cut my head.
Mom asked me to find out mistake.
I told her I’m not bad.
She smiled and went away.
The school meeting is coming next day.
I just want to be dead.
I realized I’m really afraid.
I’m afraid what the teacher will say.
I’m afraid when it will rain.
I’m afraid of the aggressive dad.
I hope math teacher to be kind.
Be kind to the girl who wants to cry.
有没有可以帮我加几行?
还有什么语法错误也帮忙改下!