请帮我看看这段英文有没有什么语法错误

请帮我看看这段英文有没有什么语法错误
Frist I want to make an comparison between me and Joe in Little Women. In the case of the bad temper and unladylike characteristics,I am a copy of Joe. In another aspects like always being tough and happy no matter what happens, I am also another version of Joe living in the real world. I love to find out new things and solve diffcult problems.I am always a searcher who are eager to explore the world around me. Believe me, I am completely a woman soldier,keeping fighting for my best as well as for my team. Talking of being an expert, I would say,now, I am an expert in everything I am interested in,including cooking and learning, especially in learning maths. And I am confident that,if in the future,something inspires my interest,I will definitely become an expert in that.
请挑出表达不当或者有语法错误的地方.感谢.