请懂英语的亲帮忙看一下语法是否有错误

请懂英语的亲帮忙看一下语法是否有错误
A Simple Scientific Experiment
Below is a description of a simple scientific experiment.It shows us how to shell the egg without hands.
Aim:To peel the eggshell without hands.
Apparatus:an egg;vinegar;cup.
Method
(1)Put an egg at the bottom of a cup.
(2)Push some vinegar down the cup.
(3)Leave the cup for 2 days.
Result
After 2 days,the eggshell has disappeared.
Conclusion
The eggshell can be peeled without hands.
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devil_mm 幼苗

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有一点小修改
Apparatus:an egg,some vinegar,and a cup
1 put an egg in a cup;
2.Add vinegar into the cup until the egg is immersed;

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yeshanfei 幼苗

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a good experiment , no problem
The description below is about a simple scientific experiment .

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康巴汉 幼苗

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没发现语法错误啊
你觉得那儿有疑问?
如果非要鸡蛋里面挑点骨头,这句有点问题:After 2 days,the eggshell has disappeared.
最好写成After 2 days,the eggshell disappears.

1年前

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