改错：Dear Susan,How nice to hear from y
改错：Dear Susan,How nice to hear from y
改错：Dear Susan,
How nice to hear from you!In your letter you ask me how to keep healthy.I would like to give you some advices.As you know,food is very important to us teenagers.While we grow very fast,we need many things,such as fresh fruit or vegetables,fish and meat.But I think you had better not eating food with much sugar or fat.And you should get a plenty of sleep.It is necessary of you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day.However,you should take physical exercise regularly,that will be good for your health.Only in this way you keep fit.
改错：Dear Susan,
How nice to hear from you!In your letter you ask me how to keep healthy.I would like to give you some advices.As you know,food is very important to us teenagers.While we grow very fast,we need many things,such as fresh fruit or vegetables,fish and meat.But I think you had better not eating food with much sugar or fat.And you should get a plenty of sleep.It is necessary of you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day.However,you should take physical exercise regularly,that will be good for your health.Only in this way you keep fit.
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How nice to hear from you!In your letter you (ask改成asked) me how to keep healthy.I would like to give you some (advices改成advice).As you know,food is very important to us teenagers.(While改成Since) we grow very fast,we need many things,such as fresh fruit (or改成and) vegetables,fish and meat.But I think you had better not (eating改成eat) food with much sugar or fat.And you should get (去掉a) plenty of sleep.It is necessary (of改成for) you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day.(However改成Besides),you should take physical exercise regularly,(that改成which) will be good for your health.Only in this way (加入can) you keep fit.
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In your letter you ask me to how to keep healthy.
food is very important for us teenagers
think you had better not eat food with much sugar or fat.And you should get a plenty of sleep.
It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day
food is very important for us teenagers
think you had better not eat food with much sugar or fat.And you should get a plenty of sleep.
It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day
1年前
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