以my first family holiday 为题目的英语作文,用过去式怎么写

Last summer,my family went to Xiamen.I believe this is the most interesting,I once visited.It left a deep impression on us.We went there for tourism,tour guide to take us to many interesting places.The charming scenery.We climbed up the mountain,visit the famous temple,go to the beach,swim in the sea.I think this place is the most well preserved in China,and fortunately it still unspoiled.What interested me most in the city,the people there are very friendly and hospitable.You know,because this is the first time we come,we lost our day.When we asked the local people,where we should go,they told me the direction very patiently.I was surprised by their enthusiasm and friendly.But the worst thing is,there are many people in the places of interest.
I hope I have time to go there,one day in the future.
What is your opinion?