高一英语短文改错My name is Linda,I used to living in the countryside
高一英语短文改错
My name is Linda,I used to living in the countryside of Chicago with my parents,that was born in New York,Living in the countryside have a lot of advantages ,The air isn't polluted ,and the environment is clearly .Besides,the neighbors are friendly for each each other.However ,there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as weii as,If you have job downtown ,you have to spend many time on the road every day,And life in the countryside isn't very excited,so most teenagers like to live downtown ,When I complete high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.
My name is Linda,I used to living in the countryside of Chicago with my parents,that was born in New York,Living in the countryside have a lot of advantages ,The air isn't polluted ,and the environment is clearly .Besides,the neighbors are friendly for each each other.However ,there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as weii as,If you have job downtown ,you have to spend many time on the road every day,And life in the countryside isn't very excited,so most teenagers like to live downtown ,When I complete high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.
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My name is Linda.
I used to live in the countryside of Chicago with my parents,who were born in New York.
Living in the countryside has a lot of advantages.
The air isn't polluted ,and the environment is clean .
Besides,the neighbors are friendly to each other.
However ,there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as well.
If you have job downtown ,you have to spend much time on the road every day.
And life in the countryside isn't very exciting,so most teenagers like to live downtown.
When I completed high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.
请注意标点符号.许多应该用句号的地方用了逗号,这也是重大错误啊!
I used to live in the countryside of Chicago with my parents,who were born in New York.
Living in the countryside has a lot of advantages.
The air isn't polluted ,and the environment is clean .
Besides,the neighbors are friendly to each other.
However ,there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as well.
If you have job downtown ,you have to spend much time on the road every day.
And life in the countryside isn't very exciting,so most teenagers like to live downtown.
When I completed high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.
请注意标点符号.许多应该用句号的地方用了逗号,这也是重大错误啊!
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