Today the weather is good,is very cool,is not very hot.The people come out to play.In the afternoon,the day gets down darkly,had the heavy rain in just a little bit.
Today, the weather is very good. it's very cool, not hot. People all come out to play. in the Afternoon, it came to be dark. after a short while it began to rain.
The weather was fine today.It's cool,so many people went out for playing.In the afternoon,the sky was dark and after a while , it rained. 描述今天的事情语态要用过去时