短文改错,I learned early in life that 1had to be more patient an
短文改错,I learned early in life that 1had to be more patient and little aggressive .From the t...
短文改错,I learned early in life that 1had to be more patient and little aggressive .From the time l was about four until I was about six ,l destroyed each of my toy .I was happy when the toys worked ,but when things did wrong ,I got angry and broke it .For a while parents bought me new toys .But before long they began to see which was happening .when I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train ,my father said ,"that's it .No more toys to you ."my punishment lasted a year .meanwhile ,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last .my attitude changed from then on .共十处错误,