马上要研究生面试了,请英语一级棒的大湿们帮我修改下自我介绍,本身写的不好,但也望您高抬贵手!

马上要研究生面试了,请英语一级棒的大湿们帮我修改下自我介绍,本身写的不好,但也望您高抬贵手!
Good morning,my dear teachers,I am glad to be here for this interview.My name is XXX,I am 23 years old.I come form Zhang jiajie,where China’s first National Forest Park located in( 这个定语从句我写对了吗?- -)I will finish my undergraduate education in YY University in july,this year.And now,I am trying my best for obtaining a chance to do futher study in YY University.(我是想强调我是YY大学毕业的,想考本校研究生!您觉得不好可以帮我换个表达方式)
Generally speaking,I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in .After I make up my mind ,I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is .When I was sophomore,I found edition of pictures very interesting ,so I learned Photoshop by myself very hard .And afer staying with my personal computer for half a month ,I was able to make pictures more beautiful and even dreamlike.(我是想说我能把图片处理的更漂亮甚至达到梦幻般的效果,不知道表达是否有误)
Well ,in my spare time,I like basketball,badminton and climbing,also english is my favorite .Sometimes,I go to English corner to practise my oral English ,but I know my English is not good enough ,I will contiune studing.
That’s all,thank you for your attention!