请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.My Dream of Life.

请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.My Dream of Life.
1、请找出这篇演讲稿的语法错误并加以改正；
2、个人认为这篇演讲稿（我自己写的,我是个高二学生,但英语不太好）太中文化,希望可以得到指点,提升档次.
3、假如你是评审,在听了我的演讲后,你会提出什么问题,我应该如何作答?
感激不尽.
演讲稿正文如下：
My Dream of Life
Good morning everyone!It’s my great pleasure to speak here.I’m going to share my topic with you ——my dream of life.
The dreams are like flowers,gorgeous and clourful.The dreams are also like the sun spirited and vigorous.So if a man has a dream that he will be full of energy and go ahead boldly.
So small as I am,I have a great dream.I want to be a teacher,and then develope the course of education to enhance the knowledge and moral spirits of people,This is my dream,a lofty dream.
In my life,there is a teacher who has influenced me deeply .She has made me determined,positive and confident.Being my Chinese teacher,she had accompanyed me from Grade 3 to Grade 6 .Durine the days,She always encouraged me with her love every tome I met setbacks .When I made some progress she would also remind me to be modest.The day before I was leaving the primary school,she said to me “You are splendid so I believe that you will gain great success.Be sure and believe the kindness and morals do always exist.I hope you can do your best to make the world more beautiful.”My teacher’s words inspired me ,so from then on,my dream came into being.I am determined to be a teacher and develop the course of education to sow the seeds of hope.
Now I am a senior high school student ,each time I choked on the weighty schoolwork I would think of my dream,so I could cheer myself up right away.My dream encourage me to move on and inspire me never give wp.
In order to achieve my dream,I will study hard to perfect myself and face our life actively and optimistically.As an old saying goes “All things come to those who wait”.I do believe that in the near future,I will be an excellent teacher.I will achieve my dream!Yes,I can!
OK!That’s all.Thank you for listening.