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sep sunday sunny
It's very fine,today.so there was a outdoor activity.Firstly,we went to the park by school bus at 7:20 p.m.And at 9:30,we arrived at the destination.Secondly.we were swimming,it's so nice.Because swimming is my favorite sport.After lunch,had a good rest and we told stories by English.Finally,in park,we took photos each other.About 5:30,we still took school bus to go home.What a good day! 很久没弄了,将就点
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we arrived at the destination at 9:30 After lunch ,we told stories by English while having a good rest Finally,we took photos each other in park 这样有语病吗 就是把你其中的几个句子稍作改动了