帮我修改一下英语作文 请指出哪儿不足

帮我修改一下英语作文 请指出哪儿不足
I was born a small village in Fujian.I was born on May 18th,1996.when I was ten years old,I could play the piano.I couldn't play the guitar.I could ride a bike,I couldn't drive a car
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rainbowsky 幼苗

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I was born in a small village in Fujian on May 18th 1996.
这样好一点
另外,我能和不能之间最好加上but
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I was born on May 18th 1996, in a small village in Fujian Province. When I was ten years old, I could play the piano, but, I couldn’t play the guitar. I could ride the bike, but I couldn’t drive the car.

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诺诺106 幼苗

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I was born in a small village in Fujian on May 18th,1996.When I was ten years old,I could play the piano and ride a bike but I couldn't play the guitar and drive a car.

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