英语短文改错,每行一个错的.last week ,i visited my hometown.i left it whe

英语短文改错,每行一个错的.
last week ,i visited my hometown.i left it when
i was nineteen years old.until then i had never
visited it.the village is near to saharanpur.i went
to saharanpur by train.from there i took en bus.my
uncle was waiting me at the road side when i got
off.ialso met several other member of the family.it was
so a hot day that i took a bath.then i visited the farm,
where i milk the cow for the first time.i stayed there
for several days.when i was about to leaving,many people
came to see them off.i was very impressed by this visit.
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last week ,i visited my hometown.i left it when
i was nineteen years old.until then i had never (until改为since)
visited it.the village is near to saharanpur.i went(去掉to)
to saharanpur by train.from there i took an bus.my (an改为a)
uncle was waiting me at the road side when i got(waiting后加for)
off.i also met several other member of the family.it was(member改为members)
so a hot day that i took a bath.then i visited the farm,(so改为such)
where i milk the cow for the first time.i stayed there(milk改为milked)
for several days.when i was about to leaving,many people(leaving改为leave)
came to see them off.i was very impressed by this visit.(them改为me)

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